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:icongreen-najotake:

Artist's Comments

London has more than just clouds and bridges :heart:

:bulletblue: Time: 2 H
:bulletgreen: Original size: A4
:bulletblue: Originated: At home
:bulletgreen: Medium: Pen
:bulletblue: Music: "Again" by YUI

Artrade with *A-Imouto :3~ it was my challenge to draw Firey in the outfit of A-Imoutos picture: somewhere in England.... and I decided London, because I wanted to draw my beloved backgrounds :heart: ..... but... THIS ONE KILLED ME. I will never again draw humas as background ;_;° but is was fun to draw the Tower Bridge~

I hope you liked it so far, A-Imouto >< I will finish it as soon as possible!

Siberu & Firey (c) Himitsu no Mahou / Me

Critiques


:iconsailor-misty:
Okay, finally I have time to write you a critique :heart: I think this is one of the best scetches you uploaded on DA. It has a lot of detail, like usual and I really love that about your style.

About the background of the photograph:
I like the fact that you added the Tower Bridge. I've been in Londen and I've seen the bridge myself, so I know what it looks like. It must have been a pain to draw, but I think you did very well! You also added lot's of people, which makes this picture even more realistic. I wonder what you will think of for the background of Sibi.

About the characters:
I like Siberu a lot. His hair looks great and I really like the way he is holding the camera. The only thing which isn't correct is that you see the back of the camera. How can he make a picture of Firey like that? Or has he already made the picture at this point? That's the only thing which isn't clear to me.

Of course, I love Firey a lot. I like the clothes you drew, even if it's just the back. One can see you put a lot of care of it. I also love the suprised look on her face ^^ You wonder why so many people love Firey, even if you don't like her that much yourself, but she's just a great character.

Overall:
I think this is a great picture and I love to see it finished soon. Please don't worry about your style, because it's great, unique and totally yours! I admire you for your skills and I hope I can help you improve with this little critique ^^
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:icona-imouto:
Ohhh, my Art Trade ! Well, it's looks very great, I very love the background!
It's looks very cute to my opinion, Siberu who taking a picture of Firey ~
I wondered what it is the circle next to her ? But, I like her expression ^^
We can't very see her outfit, but I'm very glad that you use my outfit as her original "England-outfit"
I'll wait impatiently the final version ;3

PS: Call me Imouto ^^ (or Any, as you want xD)

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Dans ma maison sous terre, Omawé omawé,
otel otel ouistiti, otel otel ouistiti...
One two three ! ♪
:iconsailor-misty:
That circle is what you see when you look in the camera, not all cameras have it, but some do =3

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:damphyr: ღ What in the world could make you so blue, cause everything I ever do, I do for you ღ
:iconsailor-misty:
I will write you a critique for this later, since you ask for critique ^^

All I can say now is that I adore it :heart:

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:damphyr: ღ What in the world could make you so blue, cause everything I ever do, I do for you ღ
:iconlatsy:
Ahaha, I love the background in there. The tower is beautiful, as well as Firey. c:

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:iconmiyatoriaka:
AWW das is ja toll!! FIREYYY!!! *___*

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:xmas: Merry Christmas to you all :santa:
:holly::smooch::holly:
:icontekuu:
I really look forward to the coloured version ^O^
It looks already great with all these details on the Firey-photo...☆ He's just showing the photo off, though, I guess? Since he couldn't properly take a photo like this xD *points to the back of the camera* BUT ONE SEES TOOOOO LITTLE OF SILVER'S CUTE CUUUTE CUUUUUUTE HAIR >_______< PLEEASE change THAAAAAAAAAAT!!! ♥
Bitte, Carinyuu o3o biiitte bitte biiiiiiiitte xD!!
Für dein Wa2-chan xD Längeres Haarchan!!! LOS XD
Aber erst das mit Ryô weitermachen *^*~~~

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You are within the darkness? Care if I join? ♥
:icongreen-najotake:
Huhuuuu! So I will call you Any xD that's sound good and is fast wo write ^^ so please call me Najo or Cary!

I planned to colour our artrade in the holidays but it looks like that I first will find time when I'm back at school xx some kind of ironic, that I have more time while school Oo° but I'm happy that you like the scetch ^^ I will give my best with the colouration :3

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